MSpace Engineer over Equestria
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Alex is a lone pioneer, a explorer, a engineer. He travels from asteroid belt to asteroid belt eking out a meager living, and last week he lost everything. He was, forced to flee on his last functioning ship, without his star charts.
Sex
Human
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
OC
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Jul

7th

2014

Help! · 6:31pm Jul 7th, 2014

I'd really love some feedback *huggles*

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Chaos Theory #1 · Jul 7th, 2014 · · ·

Your story of the wedding feels a bit... jumbeld? It feels like you didn't really know how you wanted to progress your story. Take a bit more time with the characters and plot development. I still like the story but I liked the first chapters more. It was more humor and story. I don't really want to sound harsh but I do it because I wanna see this succeed.

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