PLEHCM 3rd revision · 1:25am Jun 17th, 2014
Just a note to any who might like this story - in my efforts to promote it, I've completed a 3rd revision, which has a much longer and hopefully better-paced ending (still essentially the same tale, though). If you prefer one of the older versions, PM me and I'll see if I can dig them up.
Hey, how's it going! (Sorry, I was on vacation camping) if you'd like a proofreader I'm up for it. If not, show me where I can read it.
Not too bad, how about yourself? Hope your camping trip was rain-free (it always seems to rain when I go).
The revised version is already up, but it's a work in progress, so you're more than welcome to proofread/edit.