Im Batman...err...Mare-do-well!
To put it simply, chapter 2 is an atrocity. It is a sin against literature itself.
It is filled with out of character moments, barely explained plot points, too much filler comedy, and lack of character development. So yeah I'm gonna revise it and try to make up for my sins.
Off I go!
....damn I love that gif....
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Good luck my old friend. Adun guide your steady hand.
May Sheogorath, God of Art, Guide your hand!
No, seriously, he's not just a god of madness.
Okay! Wish you luck! Please fix the first as well.
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Dammit Derpy! Stop giving the Tardis alcohol! You know she doesn't hold booze well!
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Gonna fix that one right after I fix the second.
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I've got better than that! I got Cthulhu on my side! Right Cthulhu?
...
Cthulhu says ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn. He's also trying to eat me....
148195 HA! I remember that.
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You play Starcraft? I do too.
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Why aren't you constructing additional pylons!?
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Because I'm not a Protoss player.
150084 DARK TEMPLAR FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!
Power overwhelming!
Adun Torass!
For Adun!
Adun Toredass.....
Rebirth!
We hear you!
Must have energy!
For Adun!
Yes executor?
I hunger for battle!
EN TARO ADUN MY BROTHERS!!!!!