Want your OC in my story? · 8:50pm Jun 5th, 2014
So, I've noticed many writers do this, so I said 'why not?'. If you would like your OC in my story "German and American" please let me know but feeling me his name and info about how he is and personality. There are some things you must know before though.
First, that I'll accept only those that fit a character I had already thought or if I like how he is and find a way to fit him to the story.
Second, that there won't be more than 5-7 OC's approved because I'd like to use them for main, or at least important, characters.
Third, that there are some VERY important positions which I'll open to be taken for OC's, that means that they'll be main characters, and very important as well.
That is all, I think. I hope you guys are liking my story so far.
Main positions opened:
-General (taken by IRON HOOF)
-Officer (stallion or mare)
-Private (stallion)
-Captain of the royal guard
I'm not giving much info about this characters role on the story in order to not announce spoilers.
So, let me know if interested!
~Red
Ok.. Um.. I'm interested in an OC of mine being used. Technically both of them are versatile enough to be used for either "General" or "Officer," so um.. I guess you could choose which one you like best. Ok, um.. here I go.
1. Iron Hoof. A Dark Brown Stallion with a graying mane and tail. He isn't fat.. more like pudgy. He is very volatile, and given even a small excuse, his stack will blow and he'll start yelling and screaming at you. He believes his status makes him better than those below him, and the snobbery he uses is real. Accent is Southern American, and his cutie mark is an Iron Hoof.
2. Golden Flame. A bright Yellow pegasus stallion with a short, brown mane and tail. He isn't skinny, but isn't very above average either. Unlike some of the others around him, he believes that his high rank is just a bit of luck, and that it could of happened to anybody. He socializes with the lower ranks, and is normally a Kind soul. His fuse is a bit longer, but his anger explosions are just as bad, or even worse than Iron Hoof's. When he finishes, he is willing to offer second chances. His accent is Australian, and his cutie mark is small golden flame; the ones that seem to be what friendship would be in a physical form.
So, yeah.. Hope you like them enough.
My OC please his name and characteristics are my avatar. He may look like a Earth- Pony but he's actually a unicorn that hides his horn most of the time. And a cutie make is Vanilla plant.
He is also a officer in the Royal Guard. His cutie mark comes from working on a vanilla farm.
2178417 I like both of your OC´s
I will use them both 
2178477 Perfect! He fits well into a part I´m planning
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Really? Both? Wow, I can't thank you enough. I lack the talent to make them into characters in stories I create (in my head) So I can't wait to see how you play them! Thanks again!
2178870 no problem! Iron Hoof will have the position of General.
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So that leaves Golden Flame as the "Officer" or "Captain," right?
Tempered Steel. A dull gray earth pony stallion with a light gray mane and tail. His Cutie mark is a hammer crossed with a sword. Father of three. Wife died of pneumonia. Before his wife's death, he was an officer of the Royal Guard and was a workaholic. He was always on the field or in a forge, providing weapons and armor to the Guard. After his wife's death, he retired from the Guard but still works the forge for them. He is very blunt and doesn't dole out praise very often, although he might jokingly insult you. Very protective of remaining family. A rather talkative stallion, he usually gets his news when he delivers his goods to the Royal Guard. He is a very forgiving pony and rarely gets angry. He only gets angry at hypocrisy.
And that's about it. Poor Louis is going to have a bad time with this guy.
2182385 yep, he will XD Tempered steel is in =D
Iroh Dragon
Legoman (lego->to put together; man->Somepony (implied male) who has special characteristics relating to an area)nicknamed: the Dragon of the East, or simply 'Dragon'
Pegasus
Navy Blue
Blond Hair with orange tips
Orange eyes
Cutie Mark: (think BSA fleur-de-lis)
Can be tempermental
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Captain please
a strategist please
2185277 He can be the captain, though the name... Can I just call him by his nickname?
2185331 I guess so. I basically use that name for every thing. Ok, do it
2185456 thanks!
2178477 I have one slight question though... how is his personality?
2194130 Let's go to PM's. I believe we have certain things to talk about XD Of course!
2194187 I'll sen you a PM then. Watch for it.
2194194 Done
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When he's in Royal Guard mode he will only boss other guards around when it's needed otherwise he's a very kind pony as well as polite. So basically he's not gonna be like one of those dick officers who tell the lower ranks to go get them beer. Lol. Anyways only make him bossy when the situation calls for it.
2194342 okay! =D
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And if you want to see if he's dating a pony and want to add that just go to my profile and look for my top 10 ponies and look at the first one you see.
2194450 sure!
2185588 Hey Red, if you haven't gotten too far, I would like to have my OC's name be 'Iroh Dragon'
Here is a name meaning of 'Iroh':
The name of Iroh creates a quick, analytical, and clever mind; you are creative, versatile, original, and independent.
You have large ambitions, and it is difficult for you to be tolerant and understanding of those who desire less in life or who are more slow and methodical by nature.
Patience is not your forte.
You do, however, have leadership ability and would never be happy in a subservient position.
You are ambitious and aggressive by nature.
You would be happiest in positions where you are free to express individually and creatively and where opportunities are not restricted; you desire freedom, and do not tolerate being possessed by others.
You appreciate change and travel, and the opportunity to meet and mix with others, and to influence them with your creative ideas.
You are very self-confident and feel you can accomplish anything you set out to do, and you can, although, this name does not allow proper completion of undertakings, and forced changes cause financial losses and bitter experiences.
This name also creates caustic expression and moods which prevent harmony and happiness in close association.
When under strain, tension could affect the stomach and solar plexus.
There is a tendency for you to worry.
That actually is close to me, myself.
2237756 okay, I'll ise that XD
2237903 Thank you
2238319 No problem XD