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Jay Cruiz


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  • 419 weeks
    Looking for a few proof readers and editors.

    I'm going to try and get in contact with Zubafa again but in the event that I can't who would be interested in becoming an editor and/or proofreader for WYTAB?
    I don't have a set schedule for when I write but I'll get back to yyou. If you're interested send me a message and if possible any information on what you've proof read or edited.
    Ciao

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  • 419 weeks
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    Fuck ing hell. I hate Zecora. Like I love her character Idea but I cannot actually write in her rhyming shit at all. uuuuggghhhhh..........

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  • 421 weeks
    Jesus man, the fuck?

    Buckle your pants cause this is about to be a long winded mother fucker!

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  • 433 weeks
    I am alive

    So yes, I am alive. i have been sporaddically working on the chapter and as it stands it is just over 8k in words, it may wind up being about 15k, but thats only a possiblility.

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Jun
5th
2014

Updates, updates, updates. · 12:01am Jun 5th, 2014

Ok first off let me say that I am so sorry for taking this long with this chapter. I really want to write it and am about halfway through, I just haven't had the drive to do so in the last month or so. It's mainly my job, my friend whom i worked with and provided me rides quit so I have to find my own way to work. It can't be that bad can it? Yeah. I work 10 miles away from my house on the other side of town and I ride my bike home every time i work, so i could be riding as many as 40-70 miles a week and I will literally be so tired all I want to do is sleep.
Hopefully I can get mt license and a car soon so I can get a new job n stuff. Anyway, enough about me, ont to the story.
This chapter is mainly going to focus on Evan and his reactions to Cadence. NOw that being said I have a few ideas on how I want it to p;ay out. Varying from him falling in love with her the moment she touches him, him crushing on her, or him kissing her and running off.
But in oder to see you gotta be patient and stick around for me to finish.

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Spellcheck, this is Jay Cruiz.

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I apologize for my atrocious grammar in said blog, but seeing as how it is not in my main focus, I do not believe that the spelling really matters. In other words: I.D.G.A.F.!:pinkiehappy:

It's not just grammar, you completely butcher some words. Like NOw, or ont. I'd think, with nearly an hundred followers and six stories published. You'd write with good word usage, punctuation, and other such.

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Terribly sorry, I just haven't had the time to sit down and get used to using a laptop again. My hands move a bit faster that I can process my thoughts and it tends to completely butcher my grammatical skills. I also tend to skip spell checking until the end of my writing, but I decided to forgo it this time and ta-da, one steaming pile of blog.

2176771 Don't you just feel it when you make mistakes? I sometimes to. It's like, feeling something wrong is behind you. Hint, in your ShortDesp of "Will you take a bite?" you've made some mistakes.

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