Now, for some music
May
25th
2014
Not on hiatus but I need some opinions/help. · 6:27pm May 25th, 2014
My story, Fallen Kings and Crystal Heart is not in hiatus but I need some opinions and help. I know that I haven't gotten a lot of bad feedback but I haven't gotten much feedback at all. I like my story but I don't trust my judgement. I am working on the next chapter and I would like to know if anyone knows how I can get more people to read this and how I can get some help with it. I like writing and I like writing this but I wish I could get more people to read it.
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Wow that was...huh there was some good pepper with that. I'm in Colorado so I'm in the Mountain time zone. Yeah the chapters are a bit long? I don't know, I'm just noting them to be "too short". I guess I need to revise that Author comment, huh? I wasn't really thinking that way just that if anyone wanted their characters in it, all they had to do was ask. I've been looking for others that would look over this for me and have been putting it into places I think it would fit into but *sigh* I don't know others I might be able to get into and I'm not confidant enough to try the really good ones like Twilight's Library. By "reformatting" do you mean "rewriting?" Also, there are other pre-reader and editing groups?! 
By Celestia's beard!
2144488 Sounds good. I didn't realize I was being too detailed. I was just trying to paint a picture with words, like people have always told me to do.
2144603 Right. Got it.