rap

some days I just wanna up and call it quits
I feel like I'm surrounded by a wall of bricks
Everytime I go to get up, I just fall in pits
My life's like one great big ball of shit
If I could just put it all into all I spit
Instead of always trying to swallow it
Instead of staring at this wall and shit
While I sit, writer's block, sick of all this shit
Can't call it shit, all I know is I'm about to hit the wall
If I have to see another one of moms alcoholic fits
This is it, last straw, thats all, thats it
I ain't dealing with another fuckin' politic
I'm like a skillet bubbling until it filters up
I'm about to kill it, I can feel it building up
Blow this building up, Ive been sealed enough
My cup runneth over, I done filled it up,
The pen explodes and busts, ink spills my guts
You think all I do is stand here and feel my nuts,
Well I'm-a show you what, you gon' feel my rush,
You dont feel it, then it must be too real to touch,
Peel the Dutch, I'm about to tear shit up

Comments

[Mcyav]

Not to shabby. But I'm gonna complain like a bitch about the fact you rhymed the same word. Twice.

[Gaz1997]

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[mau5!]

138351 Yeah true,

Fuck here we go

Fuck I'm stumped, but wait, here comes something
Nope, it's not good enough, scribble it out, new pad,
crinkle it up and throw the shit out
I'm fizzlin' now, thought I figured it out
balls in my court, but I'm scared to dribble it out
I'm afraid, but why am I afraid, why am I a slave to this trade?
Sign that I'll spit to the grave, real enough to rile you up
Want me to flip it, I can rip it any style you want
I'm-a switch hitter bitch, Jimmy Smith ain't a quitter
I'm-a sit it here 'til I get enough of me to finally hit
a fucking boiling point, put some oil on your joints,
flip the coin bitch, come get destroyed,

[The sad mare]

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[BioChemicalWolfGear]

Know what...MAKE A STORY OUT OF RAPPING BRO!

Sorry I haven't been able to get to your story though
I've been kinda bored with it if I must tell you the truth...Sorry. At first I loved the idea of it. Now I'm just bored out of my mind. I actually started the next chapter but I'm just...FSDALKJALGKAGDS;LHA;LAAGS;LKJ;AGGSADLKHGS;HL to get to it.