Unused scenes

There comes a point when you write something and decide that there's no way that you're going to use this scene. I wrote several of them for the sake of fun, and to be honest I didn't go ahead and use them because they wouldn't have fit into any scene specifically.

(Unused scene that I was going to use earlier in the story between Rainbow Dash and Twilight

I looked at her questioningly. She was my friend, or at least I believed we had become friends, so I trusted that she was being honest with me, but I wasn't sure I wanted to try this.

"Twilight, trust me, there's really nothing else like it in the world," Rainbow Dash said.

I looked at her and then what she was offering me. I leaned forward and heard her gasp with anticipation. I almost pulled back then.

"It looks... It looks like it could be messy," I said.

"It can be, but it's worth it. After all, there are other things out there that are messy and fun," she replied.

I closed my eyes and leaned forward again. I felt it against my tongue. The first touch, the first taste, and I knew I had to try more. My tongue darted inside of it. Sweet Celestia it was messy, and normally I didn't like messy things. This was different though, part of me screamed not to do it, not to enjoy it, but that part was slowly dying out. I felt my tongue circle around the opening. Gently tasting the wondrous treat inside. I felt the sweet, sticky, nectar as it slid down my tongue, across my lips, on my muzzle, and down my throat. Any idea of arguing against doing this was gone. I felt the wetness increase and my desire to have more began to peak. I wanted this more than I could say, more than I could even think. The taste was driving me wild, and I only hoped that one I was with right now didn't mind how greedy I was for this. After all they opened me up to it.

"It's time to experience something new," she had said.

I was. I was experiencing this in all of its glory. I came up for a breath and looked at the smiling face before me.

"I told you that you would love Watermelon," she said.

I had considered using this as a gag between Jack and Applejack. I might still use it in the spin off story.

I watched her as she touched it. Her hoof moved down the shaft. She moved her mouth close to the tip, and her tongue touched the small indention that resided there. She moved the tongue from the tip down side of it. It seemed as if she was moving slow, enjoying every second, and driving me wild the entire time. Smiling she let it penetrate her lips, moving in so delicately, so tenderly. She took just the beyond the tip first, but then slowly she took more of the shaft. Her crimson red lips forming a perfect circle around it. I closed my eyes, allowing the image to become more than just a part of me. When I opened them again she winked and touched my hand.

"Jack, that's how Ah eat a banana," Applejack said.

This is something I had considered using in the Crystal Empire after they came back. Twilight discovering that she cared for David, and just her teasing him.

She could feel his eyes on her. There was a hidden excitement buried inside of her knowing that his eyes were so focused on her. She leaned forward, her lips touched the large round object. Lightly her lips parted and her tongue circled it, caressing it, becoming more intimate with it. She let her teeth lightly graze along the skin, and she looked to see him shutter a little.

He fought to maintain control. He had gained so much control, but seeing her doing this, this erotic scene before him was almost more than he could handle. He watched as she pulled back, her ruby red lips wet from her seductive attention. He wasn't sure how, but it was her, it was his Princess, that was able to get to him. She stood and leaned toward him. He felt the wondrous touch her lips, and could taste what she had done on her tongue.

"You were right David, I do like the giant seedless grapes better," Twilight said.

This was going to be in the Golden Oaks Library. David would have fixed baked potatoes for him, Spike, and Twilight. It didn't really feel right so I left it out.

"Faust, it's huge,"

There was something so satisfying hearing those words in her voice. I watched as she reached out and touched it lightly, gently, almost as if she expected it lash out at her. Her hoof ran down sides of it, feeling each bump and bulge.

"It's all for me?" she asked.

I nodded and watched as her magic grasped it.

"I don't think it'll fit," she said.

I smile and lean forward toward her.

"You can handle it princess," I replied.

She lifts it toward her mouth and lets the tip of it enter between her luscious lips. They spread evenly around the tip and the beginnings of the side. She looks up at me and I nod. She takes a bit more into what has to be the most perfect mouth in all of creation. I watch and realize that anything she did, even her eating a baked potato I fixed for her, was a sensuous experience.

And then there is this one. This was going to be set in Canterlot. I had thought about doing the Epilogue there, and I wrote this scene first. I scrapped that idea completely and decided to do it like it was done in the story instead. All in all... I'm glad about how I decided to do it instead.

Her tongue darted out and touched the tip. She gently flicked it, and then her tongue moved around the tip slowly. She moved her tongue drawing it gently over every inch, tasting the slight musk and sweet flavor drifting onto every inch of her tongue. She let out a soft moan as she heard the soft twitter of the one who offered this to her. She pulled back and admired the taste. The sweet, musk, and tart taste over took every sensation. It was driving her mad, making her wanting more, making her desire to have this wondrous gift all at once, but instead she continued to taste it softly, gently, and making every second last.

She looked at the one holding it. His brow covered with sweat, his muzzle pulled back into a bright smile. She grinned, moved her muzzle forward and batted her eyelashes in such a way it appeared that they could be butterflies. She tasted the pulled the entire tip into her mouth. The flavor exploded, and she let out a satisfied moan.

“Wow,” Shining Armor said.

“Thank you for the strawberry sweetheart,” Candace said.

“If you two are finished, I believe we have a dinner to finish,” Celestia said.

“Oh, it’s perfectly fine, I don’t mind if they want to eat the Strawberries first,” Admiral Ironclaw said from the edge of the table.