That Story I Just Posted

So it looks like that short story I just posted hasn't gone over so well. One like to two dislikes out of 52 views. Oh well. You can't can't win 'em all. But I'd like to know why. Can I get some feedback, some constructive criticism? Was what was going not apparent enough? I didn't want to make it too obvious, because that would ruin it. I wanted to keep the onus of figuring it out on the reader, but now I'm thinking it wasn't obvious enough. Was it just too far out there? Too abstract? What? I'd like to know why people don't like it.