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Apr
12th
2014

Proof that TC lives! · 5:28pm Apr 12th, 2014

Sorry for the wait, but I AM still writing
Keep in mind this is a rough draft

The cocoon cracked with a sound that shattered through her bones and brought Twilight’s eyes widening against the heavy liquid. Fire traced her limbs, and her forehooves came up, appearing black through the horrid sludge. Strength she couldn't name brought them banging against the fleshy wall, and she lashed her head forward- foreign instincts flashing her mouth open to bite at the fleshy prison. Somehow, it caught her teeth and gave way, tearing a long stip into the walls of her small world.
The first attempt at breathing did little but bring her head wracking forward in a cough, her head poking into the light. Her lungs forcibly ejected the gunk, leaving it to dribble from her mouth. Her ears and legs still burned, as did something rising from her back. She couldn't name where the alien pain stemmed from, and after her throat and lungs were clear, she whipped her head around with wide, terrified eyes.
Gossamer wings spiked from her coal-black back, a green shell wrapped her torso. When she brought a hoof to her mouth to muffle the scream she could feel bubbling in her chest, she found out exactly how she’d tore from her prison. Her teeth were sharp enough to cut. Her blood wasn't even red, but a stomach-lurching green.
That was it, the scream reverberated through her chest and through the dull air. Struggling madly, she fished herself from her prison and crashed into the slime-soaked obsidian floor.
“Well, you reacted well.” Twilight reeled to see Chrysalis looking slightly bored.

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:D
Now I just need to introduce Twi and Syril and it should be fairly wrap :)

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