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Ocean Heart


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  • 260 weeks
    First Big Edit Spree

    So a few chapters are done and edited. To explain some changes, Spike and Nashta are now wingless properly, so a lot has changed in the series of events involving them. Sombra is more of a consistent dick rather than a spastic one with a lot clearer goals and better transitions/interactions. I'd love it if ya'll checked it out.

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  • 261 weeks
    I guess im fixing that old story

    Im alive, question is, was I ever dead in the first place?

    I hear all the problems my writing has. I like to think I've gotten better. So Im taking the stuff there now and revising a lot in as few sessions as possible to keep the mentality I need to have consistent action and motivations. I got super off track with what the story was and want to fix that.

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  • 329 weeks
    So since Fim won't update y'all

    New chapter up. Revision on the old one. Fim doesn't want to spam inboxes since its publish date was back in june...like two years ago. Finally back into it. Who knows where it goes from here, but I feel like there might be a small difference in my writing styles...

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  • 374 weeks
    It's almost Easter

    You all know what that meeeans...

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  • 406 weeks
    Recent chapter

    It sucked. It made me realized I had a huge continuity error and it tore my whole plot apart. Im going to rewrite it and adjust that plot to fit the error so that it wont change the whole story. Im very sorry for being so late admitting this. I was afraid of failing and just ignored it, praying it wouldnt be noticed. Im a bad guy. But I'll be working hard to fix it! Taking the chapter down for

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Feb
12th
2014

So now I have a weird inspiration · 3:58pm Feb 12th, 2014

So, a clop-fic with babs and bloom thats obviously going to be a little funny? Sure why not! *one hour later* OH GOD THESE FEELS! Seriously, one of the best things ive ever read on this site was just so shocking...I genuinely have no words right now! The main thing sticking out though is the pacing, it was so perfectly paced from start to finish, a few grammar errors or little things like that was just blown over! I was too deep into the story to even care! ....so looking at my first story, my favorite oc (besides [redacted] ) and my first chance to show what I can bring...MAN I GOT TO GO BACK...with that said as eloquently as possible, im revisiting Child of the Dark....my body is so not ready...



(PS the fic is called Pen Pals I know it might already have been a thing but if you missed it, go read it!)

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Comments ( 4 )

Speaking of Child of the Dark, you know Kiss of the Dark's official sequel is now started?

1826770 I saw that! I was in the middle of Pen Pals when it hit my feed, interested but...well I was already reading that during work so im kinda stuck. Definitely getting to it as soon as im off! :D

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Heh. Well you can thank me for that; I kinda inspired him to write the official sequel. :twilightsheepish:

1826961 Thats sweet ^3^ Can't wait to sit down and enjoy it

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