Blueblood's Ascension Has Received a Thorough Scrubbing · 3:40am Jan 18th, 2014
I've spent the past few days crawling through Blueblood's Ascension; or, Alicorns Just Aren't What They Used to Be and doing my utmost to correct any spelling, grammar, or word choice mistakes I made the first few times through. If not a technical masterpiece of the English Language, it is now at least presentable at black tie events.
Specific corrections include, but are not limited to:
Blueblood is no longer referred to as "Your Majesty." "Your Highness" is far more in line with his actual royal position.
For that matter, "Your Highness" now has what I think is the proper capitalization. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Blueblood's main robot is no longer referred to as "No. 1," but is now fully typed out as "Number One." For prose reasons.
A mention of Tirek in Tartarus has been replaced with Scorpan in Tartarus for obvious reasons.
Chapter titles no longer have "the" erroneously capitalized.
General formatting. General sentence structure. General stupid mistakes.
There lies the sum total, dear readers! Take another gander through, if you want!