Spike's Out of His Depth Reboot. Update. · 11:06pm Jan 16th, 2014
How's it going everyone? I know I'd said I'd do these blog posts on Saturdays but I'm working this Saturday (11am till 3am, Sucks...) so I thought I'd just give you a quick rundown of what I've done:
About 50% of the first chapter is now complete. I have decided to merge chapters one and two together into a "super chapter", changed the scene with Twilight, Fluttershy and Spike at the library, altered the circumstances as to where Spike and Fluttershy are going, altered the scene with Pinkie Pie, added a new scene with her to compensate for it being shortened (potentially adding a new little sub-plot.) and stopped just before the setup for Rarity's plot line.
On a side note, I found this handy little picture to explain what it's like for me to write.
I'll probably do a little more tomorrow afternoon. I'm actually a little stuck with part of it.
You can view the document here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hzPAk_u_csp6k_zINvKGVqBAAAQ0gdHNUDzqRG5ntuk/edit?usp=sharing
Feel free to drop comments on what works or doesn't work.
See you next week.
~The Secret Brony
In the first sentence you fucked up bro it said
"All in all it had been a week of first for Twilight"
That "first" sould be "first's"
Also when it said "What struck her was was just how comfortable it was."
1. you put was twice
And 2nd Spike is not a it
"Spike decided it would probably time"
It sould say probably be time
Ahehe... Oops.
1726022 Fixed.
Oh, and about the whole "Spike isn't an it" thing. I wasn't referring to Spike directly, rather I was referring to the physical act of hugging a dragon. I can't believe I made mistakes in the first sentence though...
1727348 it all good man can't wait for the next chapter
1728070 -36 weeks later.
Still waiting, I see.
Not only has there been no updates/blogs in about 2 years.
But he/she has also been OFFLINE got 40 weeks as of this comment.
The Fimfiction site has been abandoned by yet another......
It is at times like these i wonder:
Where did they go, what are they doing now?
How is life treating them?
What caused them to lose interest, i can understand losing the drive to write stories, but to be OFFLINE for 40 weeks, i really do ponder, ah well they have missed out on some excellent stories in that time.
But Still, i shall be patient now as (I would like to think) i have been before
i.imgur.com/txyJLw4.jpg
Anyway, it's not like i cannot imagine up the stories up to the endings in my head.