Thanatos' Creed Reformatted (Rating: Teen) · 11:24pm Jan 14th, 2014
Hey guys, just letting you know I have went through each chapter and reformatted it to look more like my new style of writing. Trying to get use to it, so, sorry if it looks like a bit of a mess. While I was going through, I found quite a few contradictions. Most of them I fixed, but some make me facepalm. I may have to revisit Chapters 1 - 3 in the future. Mostly 3. Those chapters seemed to have been the seriously low point in the story. I think I was like "I NEED WORDS. ELDORADO, LET ME MAKE WORDS PLZ" and not much was done about it because Eldorado was like "YEAH. FALLOUT WORDS." So, maybe at a later date I'll change those chapters enough to still make sense in the story. Shouldn't be too difficult.
I have also removed those quotes at the start of each chapter. They're just dumb and provide no literary value, so, tossing those out. Update should, hopefully, be soon. Just waiting for more edits.
Need an editor?
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I have too many editors as is. Right now, I'm just having my main editor go through it, show me the major weak points, then I revise it. He goes through it again, make sure it's good, then I send it off to everyone else to fix any grammatical errors. I mean, I don't mind having another editor. We'll see if I actually need another or not.