Update · 9:33pm Dec 27th, 2013
I'm going ahead with chapter 2 on Shadows. I have spent enough time chasing small improvements, when I should simply be writing. The cycle is write. Rewrite. Well, let's do some writing, and I'll worry about the rewrite later, eh? More important to put out a chapter now, especially one that introduces a new character and setting. Improvements and revisions can be made later after I get feedback on what's already there.
Thanks all!