Second Chapter up! And other Commandos business!

Hey there, how we doin?

Good, Good. Hey, did you notice that one story I'm in the process of? Yeah That one!

Well, I've run into a small issue, and I need your opinions!
So first and foremost, y'all need a background of Psychonauts and need to know the main antagonists of the storyline.
We got Oleander (Von Dreamy), Sasha Nein (not sure who to use, was thinking Blueblood, but gimme your thoughts!), and Milla Vodello (I'm thinking Fleur or Cadence, again, ideas?) and Ford Cruller (Lord Cruller, smart, eh?).

Naturally, they're breeding psychic soldiers, and Sound will explore the depraved minds of pony society, including Pinkamena and maybe even Discord! as he discovers the true plot to Made ya look, eh? nice try. and remove their Ew! Ya filthy rotten peekers!!

I'm thinking of a way to twist the darker aspects into this one, I'm not exactly skilled in it, but I love me some dark stories. So if any of y'all have any ideas as to where I could take this, or anything for Dreamscape Commandos, please let me know! I need all the advice I can get, I'm exploring new ideas and genres.

I hope to hear some ideas and maybe jumpstart my creativity. Don't worry, the truth will be revealed in due time.

"I am the milk mare. My milk is delicious."
That is all. Move out, Commandos!