"And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love." - 1 Corinthians 13:13
It has happened! Story should, with any luck, be posted within the next hour! Also, yes, I did decide to change my name, because a: I like Picatrix, and b: reasons. Hope you all enjoy reading!
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Changed from Cerulean1313 to Wintergreen... I take it he's still called Cerulean Snowgleam in the stories?
Yes, I have something to look forward to after my drive back to camp!!
Or... it's going to delay me leaving, one of the two!!
Looking forward to the new story.
One suggestion though, the story description is a little wall-o-texty. I'd recommend breaking it up a little, and potentially rewriting the third sentence, it just goes on forever.
I was going to ask who it was you were, but once I saw your stories I remembered your old username.
~SolidFire
OHMYGOD YOU FINALLY DID IT YAYAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Now the question is, do you plan on taking Tears in the Snow down?
oh wow, i saw blizzard in the feature box, but i didnt recognize it, but i did see your name, then I went into my feed and saw your name there but was like "WTF?!" bacause I didn't know it was you, then i felt like an ass when I thought "oh yeaaaaaaah, thats cerulean isn't it?"
1437864 I'm rather inclined to agree, though I spent a good two hours staring at the screen trying to come up with a way to make it better prior to release. Perhaps I'll give it another go.
1437864 How would this do for a revised story description:
It was only natural that introspection would come in the wake of something as monumental as a royal wedding. With the festivities of Shining Armor's betrothal long since past, Twilight has come to realize that there exists a tremendous gap in her studies of friendship, that being that she doesn't really have any stallion friends. That's likely because pursuing platonic relations with the opposite gender is rather difficult when there's a growing desire in her heart for something deeper than her friends can provide.
After an afternoon of disturbed study time and unexpected dental catastrophe, the last thing Twilight would have expected was for opportunity to come knocking in the form of a quiet stallion reading in her library. Enraptured by the chance to expand her education, Twilight bumbles into the newcomer's life without the faintest notion of the depth of the pony's loss. Though her faith in friendship is strong, it will take more than her magic to undo the scars of his past, and keep a heart once filled with wonder from succumbing to the power of doubt.
Set after the events of the season three premiere and before Twilight is crowned princess.
Is that any better?
Works for me.