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Prak


Writer. Editor. Reader. Reviewer. Gamer. Armchair mafia kingpin. Trans-dimensional yodeler. Cthulhu's unplanned 667th son. Grand High Muckymuck of the Mystic Order of the Defanged Gerbil.

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  • 258 weeks
    5th Annual PC Gaming Giveaway

    He’s making a list and checking it twice, but he doesn’t care whether you’re naughty or nice. When Santa Prak comes to town on his birthday, all he wants to see is a PC in your house. And what’s he going to stuff your stocking with?

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  • 311 weeks
    The Fourth Annual PC Gaming Giveaway! (CLOSED)

    Remember that time, back in 2015, when I decided to give other people gifts on my birthday? Good times, right? Right. Many games were given away, and I’m sure many hours of enjoyment were had by all who received them. If I’m wrong, don’t spoil my delusion. Just nod dumbly and keep reading.

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  • 334 weeks
    A Completely Humorless Rant (with a bit of profanity) About Something I Hate

    Donald Trump arrived in my area a couple hours ago. People have gathered to listen to him speak. Other people have gathered to protest.

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  • 363 weeks
    The Third Annual PC Gaming Giveaway

    Hello, you fine folks. I've come out of hiding to let you know the most magical day of the year has arrived once again. On this date, twenty-five years and a few dozen months ago, I first graced the world with my presence. Now, we all know most people are selfish bastards who only think about themselves on such occasions—and who can honestly blame them for being excited about a day when people

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  • 412 weeks
    Badfic Slaughterhouse #27

    To the surprise of all, the doors of the Badfic Slaughterhouse have opened once again. Five stories await judgment. Which ones are worth reading, and which ones will be thrown into a grinder for your twisted amusement? Click the button below to find out.

    In this edition:
    —Rarity subverts expectations by not subverting expectations.
    —Twilight adopts Sweetie Belle.

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Sep
27th
2013

Taking the Plunge · 2:51pm Sep 27th, 2013

I'm sure every author out there knows that feeling. You know the one; where that Submit button is staring you in the face and you have to confront the daunting challenge of actually clicking it for the first time. 'Is it really ready?' you ask yourself. 'Am I ready for it to be seen?' is another big question.

Well, I finally clicked it. My first FiM story is out there in the wild. This one's an ambitious sucker too. I've written stuff before, but this one's the toughest one I've ever put together. So many plots running at once. So many things to bring together to create that perfect blend of logical progression and complete insanity. I'm pretty confident that I can avoid turning it into a jumbled mess, but working with so many characters means putting a lot of words down.

Of course, if you're reading this today, you already know about that particular project. I'm sure it's what brought you here. Hopefully you're wondering when I'll release more of it. The good news is that the whole thing is planned out and most of it is written. Very little is properly edited though, and since I mostly do that myself, it takes a while. Hell, I spend hours just getting the formatting right. As for how long it'll be, I'm not gonna say. The nature of the story demands that it be massive though. Not George R. R. Martin massive, mind you—that guy takes 300 pages just to clear his damn throat—but around reasonable length for a novel.

That said, I'll confess that I think Chapter 1 leaves something to be desired. So much exposition to lay down. So much groundwork to lay. I can only hope it turned out well enough to convince people to keep reading until I'm done editing Chapter 2, which I had a lot more fun writing.

Feel free to drop any sort of criticism you like. I have thick skin (some might even call it bulletproof, but that would mean I'd have to stop writing and become a super villain hero) and even if I disagree with you, it's always good to know what people are thinking. I'd like to know exactly what people think I do well and what they feel are my weaknesses.

In other news, I'm a little self-conscious about the lack of cover art. I couldn't find anything that captured the tone of the project and I have no talent for creating such things. Hopefully something will turn up eventually.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy There Goes the Neighborhood. I may release a couple of one-shots in-between chapters, but this one will have almost all of my attention until it's done. Thanks for your attention.

Now get the hell off my lawn, you punk kids.

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Comments ( 2 )

It's a fine piece of work so far. But it won't matter how good it is if you don't get cover art. Get some cover art & send it in to EqD. Don't wait until you've got 20,000 words; it will just make the EQD review slower and more difficult.

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Thanks for the input. I'm keeping an eye out for something suitable.

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