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Jun
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2013

I Am Not the Actor Update; New chapters + new scenes added to old ones. · 6:59pm Jun 20th, 2013

Today's update of I Am Not the Actor includes a new chapter, and it also includes various minor edits and changes across all current ones.

Most importantly, there are new scenes in chapters 1 and 5; around 900 words total of new material have been added.

Special thanks to Nonagon for encouraging these edits and pointing out some of my plotting missteps.

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Can you be a bit more specific about what changed? I read these a long time ago and re-reading with partial memory is a bit strange because I'm never sure about what I should be paying more attention to. :/ I don’t want to sound disinterested, it’s just that I have trouble focusing when reading things over again. Thanks

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In chapter 1, everything before the horizontal rule is new material. In chapter 5, everything from “Hi, Rarity! What’re you up to?” to “Well, I’ll just have to keep an extra-careful, [. . .] is new material.

I don't like retconning things if I can avoid it, but my editor made a convincing case they would help. If you want to ignore the additions then you can; the same events are covered in other parts of the story, the new edits merely cover them in greater detail.

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