New Story! Hooray! · 1:21pm May 15th, 2013

I have sent my story to the editor (probably because you all are still asleep or posting ponies) and am awaiting a response. This is a good 3k words in length, and I tried to pour myself into it. I think this one is a keeper in terms of the ending, and I tried to stick to canon. Unfortunately, I feel it begins a bit cliche but changes from there into something better. This is my first story which will have a romance tag and is the 4th out of 11 stories in the not so well known, one tag tour/challenge.

Toodles!

Edit:

otherwise, if you all want me to update something (still trying to figure out twinkless but you can still ask, I will try to focus on it, and am nearly done with where I want it to go.) just ask, whether a sequel to the green room, another chapter for something bad is coming down. Anything you want, I shall try to give as best I can (except human.. I have a special place for that... well, I want my first human story to be special and over 30k words.)

edit again:

I have posted the story, I tried to lengthen it out, it is now about 3.6 k words in length and probably is pretty rough. I am still awaiting approval if I get it... hopefully I do. Please be gentle mods. Little Toodle Flip only has 3% shields and a sanity rate of 25% and dropping. Shut up me. We'll talk about this later... Do you really have to be so hard on yourself? Well, considering it is me, yes. Why bother fighting, they all think I am crazy anyway. Shut up you fool, they'll never know...

edit the third:

Alright, turns out I should have used an editor. Most things are fixed, but the damage is still done. I have shamed myself by this embarrassment, and I can't think of any way of alleviating it other than seppuku, but that is a bit extreme. Maybe. A written apology won't work, because I don't know who disliked it. I can't try to improve it because they didn't say why (although somepony was helpful, which was nice. I often can't spot my own little mistakes unless there isn't much there to begin with) With those tips and pointers, I increased the size of the story by nearly... 800 words.

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