Apologies! · 6:14pm May 6th, 2013
My most recent story 'Almost Siblings'. Yeah, I want to apologise to everyone for that.
I started blissfully writing away a story that was given to me by my man. What I didn't realise is that he didn't talk it through with me to actually write and certainly not post, but as an experiment in changing the HiE scenarios.
The story was, in fact, a ponification of a hentai called Ane Koi, and he used it as a base for the excercise. If I'd known that, I wouldn't have started posting it (he actually got quite upset when I said I posted it, he honestly didn't expect me to), so here is my apology to all of you who read it and faved it in equal state of ignorance to my own as to the source material.
I'm really sorry. I'll make it up to you with a community inspired fic I've been wanting to write.
Love to all, and I hope this doesn't put me on anyone's black list.
Zo.
I thought it was quite good, hell, it even made feature.
Are you going to leave it up? Or take it down?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Hey, good on you for realizing your error and owning up to it. It sounds like an honest mistake on your part, and for that, you're forgiven.
We all buck up sometimes.
1058863 Taking it down, the chapters are already deleted so that I'm not going to get any more un-earned attention from it.
Wait... it made featured? Wow... I mean, I read through the first chapter of the hentai, it was alright, but obviously the actual conversion to pony was enough to attract a lot of people...
I wonder if I could get away with doing that if I stated it before-hand? 'This is a ponification of [insert manga here] please support the original.' That kind of thing... Nah, better not push my luck.
1058871 Thanks, that honestly does make me feel a little better about this, but I'm so shame-faced right now... I'll need a while to cool down.
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Unfortunate, but, hey, your choice.
But you never noticed it made feature? It did, quite quick, too.
~Skeeter TL
I saw the original posting and added it to my 'read later' list' unaware of the he tail it was based on, and never heard of it. I say you should ask the admins if it is okay to repost it but with the disclaimer stating the inspiration beforehand.
Was looking forward to reading it too...
1058913 Thanks for the sentiment, but sorry, I'm not pushing my luck here. I don't want people to think that I can't write my own stuff, least of all have something to my name that people can straight up call a rip-off.
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Okay thipen. Loved that cover art. Best humanized CMC pic I've seen
1058944 Head on over to Lalox's deviantART (The 'source' link is still working as long as the story's up) He's got a ton of stuff you might like then.
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No link. Do you mean on the story's page or where?
1058977 On the story page, hover over the image and it comes up with 'source', but you could always just hit this link here for the quick way. Usually when somebody says [name] on deviantART, it's just that name plus '.deviantart.com' and if it isn't, they're doing it wrong
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fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/032/8/b/cutie_mark_crusaders_by_lalox-d5ntymw.jpg <Click it for source
I didn't get the chance to read cuz l faved it for later
I'll keep it on my list and wait to see if you put it up again,also can't you post it on another site?
1059000 Sorry for that, but no, I really don't like the idea (the rather specific idea that's been nagging at me since I discovered it) that I ripped off another person's porn. I mean, there's something... a little weird about it, beyond the simple rip-off.
Aww. Sounds like an honest mistake, but I was really looking forward to seeing how you handled the situation. Any chance of some sort of human-raised-in-Equestria story from you in the future? (And since it's cancelled, who were the adoptive parents, anyway? Unless you plan to use that bit somewhere else.)
1059014 Oh, naturally I'll attempt the idea of raised-in-Equestria again, sometime when I can get the idea of having the CMC be his big sisters and get a harem story going with them - that's kind of the one scenario I really wanted to write about - out of my head.
Also, it's not really all that important, but his 'moms' were Lyra and Bon-Bon. I like the fanon Lyra and her enjoyment of things like humans, I was going to put in something about her being the one to identify him as human, and to take care of him when he first arrived, and Celestia, Luna and Twilight used 'human' because they didn't know what else to call him. Then, since he already trusted her, having Lyra adopt him would have been logical for the ponies in authority. See? No big secret, I was going to get to it.
Hmm... maybe I could do a quasi-incest story with that as the base... a boy raised in Equestria, by Lyra and Bon-Bon. She's not the perfect mom, but he loves her more than anypony. And when he hits puberty... bam, instant set-up for that guilty incest feeling without the actual incest.
I might even have that one... thanks for making me ramble my way to a new idea!
Awww, but I really wanted to read it. I thought it was going to be really good.
Thanks for the lead about the hentai. Annyway, what sort of story are you writing?
1061112 I call it Convenient Toys, and it's one inspired by a thread in Clopfics. Basically someone posted an image from Sleepless In Ponyville, the one with Scootaloo and Dash sitting on the log and Scoots is wigging out over something.
My take on that was that all ponies have access, through mail order or Carousel Boutique, to discrete toys like plugs or vibrators to help them scratch the itch in a female dominated society.
Some of them are thrill-seekers, like Rainbow Dash, who even enjoy wearing them in public, where their tails can conceal anything untoward. Then, luckily for the filly, one of Scootaloo's fangirl photos of Dash in action shows up a silicone sphincter spreader, and she instantly wants to find out what it is and where she can get one.
Then I proceed to tell the story of Sleepless in Ponyville, except instead of nightmares, Scoots is losing sleep through rather excessive use of vibrating toys.
In the thread a certain trollishly inclined type posted up a Gilda image tagged 'And then they all fucked', to which I expanded the scenario to include Rarity catching Sweetie using one of hers, Dash and Rarity then teaching their respective charges the proper use of those toys, taking turns on each filly, filly-on-filly, and a few other choice positions. Finally, the night turns to morning leaving Scoots and Dash cuddled up in bed, Rarity sleeping things off on her lounger and Sweetie Belle spread wide open across the camp table with a toy that's run out of battery still slowly working its way out of her via gravity. Applejack emerges from her tent, sleepy and not paying attention, notices Sweetie and is actually quite unfazed. When she returns to her tent she finds it just how she left it, with Applebloom leaking seed onto her brother's stomach and Big Mac himself a full mast from morning wood. Not wanting to waste it, AJ simply sits down on it, and the story comes to a climax with her.
Now go have a cold shower
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That's one of the more interesting ideas I've seen in a long time.
The best I can come up with is ponies in Chechnya.