Twisting Between the Sheets - Rewrite · 10:55pm Apr 26th, 2013
If anyone were to go check TBtS's page, they would see that Part 4 has been unpublished and the fic has been remarked incomplete (if you were really observant, you might notice that Disgraced has been remarked incomplete too, but I'll get to that one some other time).
I have a problem, and that problem is that I like to get things right. I hate losing. When I don't get things right, I spend a lot of time thinking about all the reasons why I didn't get it right and all the ways I could have done better. This is particularly bad with writing because I've found that I'm never able to get things perfect, and I never will, but I try anyway.
It's this reason that I rewrote Rarity's Mare of the Evening into Twisting Between the Sheets (I need to start coming up with shorter titles) in the first place, and it's the reason I'm now (and the irony of rewriting a rewrite isn't lost on me) rewriting the last part of Twisting Between the Sheets.
I'm aware of the problem of revising something people have already read, that's why I'm not tearing the whole thing back down to the floor and starting all over again. I can however still in good conscience change those last few scenes to better fit the tone and theme of the story. The resolution will be the same, but it will happen differently, and it won't be written with the pseudo-happily-ever-after haze.
I apologize for taking something that has already been read. I will put it back up when I post the rewritten version. Also, if anyone who enjoyed (or didn't enjoy) the fic before would be interested in doing some quick pre reading of the new version when it's finished I would be extremely grateful.
If you want, I would like to help. You have a good premise and without meaning any disrespect, I don't think you have been looking at the story in a big enough scope.
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Well, I'd be interested to know what you mean by that. Though, I'm not willing to do any sort of full rewrite, at least not right now. I do have some interest in expanding it, but still not right now. I'd just like to fix what little I can now. Of course, any and all feedback and suggestions are welcome.
Either way, I'll be in touch sometime soon.