Concordia story updates · 5:41am Feb 24th, 2013
Hey guys, first let me just say thank you for liking my story so far. You guys are the reason why I keep writing and why I want to make this the best story it can possibly be. To that end I have made some updates. Here they are:
1. Changed the prologue so it's just the first chapter instead and renamed it.
2: Added a whole new scene at the end of chapter II.
3: Made several changes in chapter III. Most of them dealing with the scenes with Spike and Peewee in that I switched Peewee's role with Owlowiscious.
4: Chapter IV: I fixed Celestia's line regarding Discord and tried to fix Nightmare Moon's speech a bit.
5: The story now officially takes place sometime after "Games Ponies Play"
Overall I tried to fix some of the punctuation errors and whatnot. But I think it's time I get a prereader. And an editor. I hope to submit this to EQD sometime this week so wish me luck!
Again, thanks for just being awesome and patient with me. Now that I don't have season 3 hanging over my head updates should be more frequent.
Speaking of which, on to chapter VI!
As of 3/9/13 I have my first strike against my story from EQD. Two to go, whoo!
All seem to be good changes, though, after Games Ponies play? that means Discord is also back?... Well your story your choice, i'd better get back to writing my review for the fifth chapter!
When I saw that Concordia updated, I danced around the room. I have been waiting to see where the story was going. You've made my day.
By the way, good luck with EDQ. I hope that you get a nice pre-reader, and not one of the jerks that have become so notorious.
862927 I live to serve and aim to please.
And thank you. Gotta make sure this thing is up to par so that they have nothing against me.