Should I...? (New Story Idea) · 11:34am Jan 15th, 2013
Alright, I have a new story (yes i know i know, but i couldn't help it~) and I'm writing the second chapter to it, since I thought it would be best to have that right off the bat. However... jeez... I think I MAY have gone a bit overboard on it. No, I'm not talking about length, I'm talking about what I put into it.
I'm not going to describe it, but at one point I think I made one of the characters go TOO angry/nutty at someone and... well... yeah...
So the question I guess is... should I keep the overboardness and have it be a very well done story, or go back and delete/change it and have it a moderately well done story? I like the overboardness and the mature rating will filter people, but not so sure bout others...
Whatcha all think? 
(ALSO GONNA NEED AT LEAST ONE PERSON TO READ IT TO SEE IF ITS FINE~)
I say go for it. Also, I don't suppose you could recommend me a good proof reader/motivational influence for me to aid in my rather poor fan fiction production? And you also posted this at 12:34 am
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Try here.
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I would opt to read it, but I have a tendency to own a rather weak WSOD. Not sure if that would bother you.
If not Trixie wouldn't mind looking at your stuff for you again.
I'd be willing to read it.
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*points at Trixie* that~
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hmmmm group i may use... and sure, you an conan would be perfect~
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Ah~ faithful conan~ I'll send you the link~
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Well, if you want me, sure. Though again: While I do my best to be polite and nice, I do rather have high standards for writing for the most part and have a tendency to always say that everything is crap.
Constructively anyway, I like to help writers do better if I can. But it can still make me a bit of a nuisance to work with I think, polite+Friendly or not.
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Well, already sentcha the link so its a bit late now~
Anyways, any criticism is good criticism, whether it be harsh or not~
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Oh, I don't do harsh, I just never run out of things to criticize about improving on.
Ah well, Trixie looks forward to working with you again and will get this done, ASAP. (Within the constraints of proper quality of course.)
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Sure, take your time, no rush obviously~
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Trixie still likes to be efficient.
Kudos for recognizing Trixie though, no one else has so far.
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lol yay for first~