the InsanityCorps and thehalfelf story writing process, at it's best · 3:04am Dec 24th, 2012

This was actually inside of the next chapter of The Last Hope of a Fallen Nation. Apparently we weren't smart enough to just move over to the chat pane of GDocs, so it ended up in the story. That   is a placeholder I use. This was actually IN the story. And now, it is here
KEY: Blue is me, red is InsanityCorps
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  “Can I pwease have youwe souwl?”

“Yes, yes you can, but I have no soul...”

No, my ginger ass is the one without a soul.

Mum is ginger

and so am I

...you fucked up my first line indent

I no care for even one shit

….you should...

NO!

I shall relegate Commander Bane to obscurity

…. what?

Commander Bane the changeling commander in this fucking story, who ordered Dodge Junction burned to the ground

I know that but what?

You told me I can’t name someone Bane and then let him die in obscurity

Nope, he is not allowed to be left out of a story until he dies in a fantastical way like a magical implosion

….Chrysalis shall sit on him

Not like the anticlimactic end of the Bane from Batman

That actually didn’t come to me...because I don’t really follow battyman....I still think Chrysalis sitting on him to death would be very funny

But everyone would be like “Really? -_- fucking really?”

Nah, they’d be like “AHAHAHHAHAHA, seriously...? Dumbass”

That’ll be the spoof

indubitably. I need to bring Mortis into this somehow (reference to a WIP)

SPOILER

SPOLIER

I can say I kinda didn’t see that coming

neither did your mom

fuck off

what? it’s not my fault she likes pony fanfiction....jeez

_-_ (you’re doing it wrong) No, its upside-down

SPOILER

Its also called the source of information for Bane

SPOILER

….incl+u_din+g your +=o=+ (IC put the random characters all over the place)

yup (...don't remember who said this, I think it was IC)

Feel the need to post this
conversation somewhere
WHAT DID YOU DO TO
THE FUCKING SPACING

You did it

lies

Spike says otherwise

Spike watches it for the plot

that frame was put there on purpose

Fan of JapaneseTeeth then?

Yes, I forget who told me to go read his... Cloudy

Cloud Dude? <bingo

I had a comment conversation with him like I did SS, but it was in screencaps like that

XD (I still love how he HAD to have the name Slightly Serious... the joke of S.S. made itself)

...I don’t talk to SS as much anymore...

Same towards me and Cameron (Faust_Fan_Five), he was one of the first to recognize me

um, my team has....I can’t even call them the team at the moment, you do more with me storywise than they do

…. I honestly don’t know why either.... this stuff we talk about and the shit we write is just so interesting

...they are both writing shit too, and I actually know them... I couldn’t go sledding with them on thursday.... so Josh hit me in wood shop friday

I see.

not really. They were my writing team, but John and Joel both do swim team, and therefore don’t have time. Besides, John dislikes dark shit more than I do.

Why?

don’t know.

well then, you guys don’t like darkness while I practically bathe in it. Mainly because of this saying, “You gotta experience the darkness to truly appreciate the light.”

That sounds like some SolCal/Kingdom Hearts shit right there. (reference to a story that will probably never see the light of day again) remember?

Yes, how could I forget

can’t tell if you’re being sarcastic or not

a little... but I do remember and am forever sad I cannot read that bullshit

Fucking dog stepping on my mouse.... I briefly played with the idea of ponyfying it... but I probably won’t

^(0_0)^ I would love you forever

….I don’t really want to though... I don’t want to take the darkest part of my life and mix it with the brightest

I can see logic in that... but my brain would just say “fuck it” and move on to doing it

I might remake it for you, but not pony form

^W^

...but the pony stories come first. Just have to get the ideas to start goin again

okay (here is to lighten the mood)

...are we done here? lol

Probably, and why are we using the story instead of the chat box............ fuck the police?

because....reasons.............................................................. fuck you

but fucking the police is funnier

bitch please, friendship is magic, we aint gotta ‘splain shit

good point

And that is why not much gets accomplished most of the time. It's great fun though.

-thehalfelf

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