In Between Worlds - remake

this is the remake of my old magical girl story which you can find the link here: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/996591/in-between-worlds-as-well-other-storys

here the new one
lore and ideas: https://pastes.psstaudio.com/post/2578d2da50c7437a821744e0f93025c9

ch.0: https://pastes.psstaudio.com/post/ee3b5968094e4c828256e1792be41151
ch.1 (WIP): https://pastes.psstaudio.com/post/a8d280809fe54febb26429361228455f