Jan
21st
2024
Chapter 4 Revision Finished · 7:57pm January 21st
Go read my fic! 
Chapter 4 was a real piece of work, but absolutely worth it.
5 is next. That one should require less work, since I already revised it fairly heavily as the first part of this whole endeavor. I would have finished that one, but I realized very quickly that it would be much easier to redo things after I’d set in stone everything that happens before it. Anytime you change one key thing in a narrative, it ripples out and affects everything ahead of it. In this case, they were really big ripples.
I have to completely redo an introduction of a character! Yay!
Yes sir
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Hey, you’re new here, or at least I haven’t seen you before!
5764771I already had your story marked to read later, but now I have to read it, so expect some useless comments from me here and there