First Revamp republish! (Chapter 1-2) · 4:12pm Jul 15th, 2023
These are the first two Revamp chapters of the Pizza pie lore. As you see I took some tips from the now-enabled comments section (which is hard to swallow but whatever) and fix my mistakes a bit. I'm saying a bit because sooner or later I might get a proofreader one day and do a better job at it than me.
Based on the teaser video I made, this all took place weeks after the last episode happened. This means I'm going for a different route for Equestria #1022 (more on that later). Right now I'm trying to fulfill my promise to republish it and this is it.
Apologies again if I couldn't just republish the whole unpublish ones, those parts take time to add plots and dialogue. But! as for the next republish I will add the first chapter cover, be sure to wait for that. Thanks again for your supports* and hope you like the revamp.
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