Progress & Vacation · 12:57am Jul 9th, 2023
Hey there, guys. Been a while since I've updated anything, eh? Well, you can blame work for that. Shifts have been getting more grueling as we move into Summer, but I do have some news for you all.
Burning Sins is not canceled or on an indefinite hiatus. I'm still working on the story and ironing out everything. The reason the chapters haven't been coming out is because I'm making the entire story plot and summary beforehand to flesh out characters, relationships, and scenarios this time around. I'm not thinking on my feet, which was what Everfree Guardian was.
Since I'm on vacation with the family, I will have more time to write this time around, but it will only be in the evenings. Trust and believe that i will not let you guys down on this.
As for Burning Sins, here's a spoiler to wane you over.
The events of Everfree Guardian are a rough draft that takes place in Season 1 of MLP. Burning Sins will have these events play out similarly, resulting in the same companions as the previous story. However, since Applejack was one of the aggressors in that situation back in Canterlot, Nathan is less than willing to cooperate or work for her. Thus, he will be taking up a job either with Twilight Sparkle or Rarity (I haven't decided which yet).
That's it for the spoiler. I'll be getting Chapter 4 out soon. I'm still in the progress of writing Chapter 6 and will go back to iron out Chapter 4 here soon.
I love this story man. This is the kind of thing I've been looking for. Can't wait for more.
Twilight Sparkle would make more sense to me. She would want to make up for what her brother did to him and he'd have more to do at the library than he would in a boutique.
Great story though, looking forward to chapter 4.
sounds good man I am planning make a story about sunset and the Pj masks, Twight's transformation in to an alicorn from a different point of view along with a few others BY the way depending on Nathon's frame of mind and maybe when he gets some medical attention.
Twight. to learn to us magic if he has an object of power, but he may not trust her do to the actions of her brother.
rarity. to get a fresh set of clothes and maybe a lesson in generosity, if im not mistaken she didn't do any harm to Nathon back in canterlot
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Not to mention, Twilight would also be incredibly interested to learn about someone who isn't a pony as well, due to her massive amount of curiosity and scientific mindset.
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good point if he Gettes some medical attention