Burning Sins · 6:04am Feb 10th, 2023
Dunno if this is repetitive. Don't know how this reception is going to be, but after taking so long away from Everfree Guardian and reading back on the story I've made, I realized that it is solid, and I intend to keep it up, but ultimately, it does not capture the kind of person that Nathan Schmidt is supposed to be. The hallucinations, the memories, they were all supposed to incorporate a history that made his reclusive nature make sense, but his premise made less and less sense because of how fast Nathan opened up to Ponyville.
So, once again, for the second time, I'm doing a restart. Hopefully, with Burning Sins, the remake of Everfree Guardian, I can hit it out of the park with better storytelling than before as well as good characterization.
Sounds good man. Can't wait for it........I still expect a harem my boy.......please include the princesses too. Jk you know what's best for your story. Until burning sins.
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Oh Lord please not a harem.
Don't listen to the coomers man.
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Lmao nah I just find it cool. I don't know if herd is the same thing but I've seen a ton of it on here lately. Well at least mentioned. And also I thought that's where u were heading especially when r, aj, and flutes were wearing revealing outfits at Christmas. Thought it was buildup lmao. Regardless it's up to u and I hope to see this story again soon. Ttyl. Also celestia is my fav.
Hey, you do you man whatever makes the story better in your eyes you have all ours support.