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2023

The Siren: Notes for Chapters 3, 4 & 6 · 2:17am Jul 4th, 2023

Chapter 3

Two new character tags: and .

Rozetri

This will be on the test.


Chapter 4

has now been added to the character tags.


Chapter 5

(No notes for this chapter.)


Chapter 6

Oh, don't read after this point if you haven't read the chapter, or you'll be spoiled.



I don’t generally add character tags for villains, as they tend to be little more than narrative devices. But if I did, this is where I’d add the tag.

“Moondancer”

Night Lancer forgetting to put the space in her name was a deliberate choice on my part, although I think it was too subtle for any reader to see it as a clue that he was a fake.

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