Chapters 8-14 Deserve A Revision · 7:16pm Jun 25th, 2023
So, where we last left off with the revisions, I thought that initially, we wouldn't need to go further. The tone and attitude had shifted, and it felt much better. Unfortunately, something changed my mind....
As I look at it now, chapters 8-14 can be revised because we don't fully go anywhere...in terms of places. It's a lot of one-off destinations and fight sequences, along with lore and world-building. The way I see it...we can fix it to make it sound better, and that's what I plan on doing.
If you all don't mind, we are going to take another break from the current storyline and head into the past. The revisions of chapters 8-14 will be the focus for now, and hopefully we'll have it done within the next two weeks. Stick tight and I'll catch you in the next blog!
-Harpy
P.S. Here's a spoiler for chapter 30: Nacreous goes alone, we visit the "future" retirement settlement for 'The Crown,' and a preview to Alexander's future plan. 
I knew you weren’t really gonna end the revisions with chapter 7, it was to interesting to only have 7 chapters be revised.
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Yeah, but even as I thought about it, the entire first half of this book deserves a revision.
I've developed a new style through the newest chapters, and the old style feels...outdated. Plus, tonality and attitude are being fixed hella hard.