After-Sex Smoke #34: Same Heart, Different Body · 2:01pm Apr 17th, 2023
Hello! Welcome back to the After-Sex Smoke! I’m your host ThatOneGuy, and today, we’ll be going over my most recent story, Same Heart, Different Body. Hope you enjoy it!
This was an interesting commission. It’s a take on the classic Romeo & Juliet formula detailing the love of a pony and a griffon. Though it’s been done before, I actually enjoyed writing this a lot. So much, in fact, that I decided to write it twice. I wasn’t happy with the original version and thought that it was a bit too unfocused. When I got around halfway done, I decided to upend it all and rewrite the outline. That’s why this took me so long, in fact. This was meant to be out before April, but things simply didn’t turn out this way.
As for the story itself, I had a lot of creative freedom when it came to the plot and the characters. I think I did an okay job giving them the necessary… well, character to make them interesting and compelling, but I always feel like I could have done more. Who’s to say?
About commissions, I’ll be reopening them soon. Soon being relative of course, since something could happen that throws me through a loop. In fact, something may already be in the process of doing that… Unfortunately, the future is cloudy. I have one commission still in the works, so I’m not completely disconnected from the site, however, it may be a while before I make the adjustments that I wanted to.
Anyway, I’ve been me, you’ve been you, and that has been this episode of the After-Sex Smoke! Hope to see you all again!
Great!! Can't wait to commission a new story!!
It won't be a sequel to the Fluttershy one (not for a little while, at least)
Of course you can always do more but that's what sequels are for wink wink. Though that's something for the future when your ready.