I want to hear it all!… · 1:25am Mar 2nd, 2023
In my fic (The Slash Of Truth), I have a few bits and bobs planned out for futures chapters and ideas that will be set in motion soon but, I also want to hear what you guys want…
I want ideas that you think should happen for future chapters…
I want your own OC’s with reasonable backgrounds…
I want to hear about what you think should happen to the hero/villain Joel…
I want to hear it all!!!
Of course, the ideas have to be reasonable and realistic, something that fits this story about Joel and his revenge.
Also, I would also like to thank BMIR, AgentKorpsman and Mlpengineer for helping with a few things, they have shaped my plans massively from my original plans for the better so, shout out to these gents! Check out their work and show them some love.
As always… Cheers!
Cheers to you as well!
Now, I've discovered, that I'm better at secondary characters and locations, than front characters... so I'll give you a few of my ideas.
1. As much as I love the pleasant character of Ditzy - she needs a role in the team. You could put her into the armory. Make her cope with thoughts of killing somebody by mechanical movements of cleaning guns. That will (hopefully) make her more easy around weapons and teach her a valuable skill.
2. Make up your mind about two important things - harem and team. I have nothing against stories with multiple partners, but... is this really - what Joel would do? The team itself is another topic. Everybody that is an adult and lives in Joel's house will eventually become a part of the "Legion". That means - they need a clear role for the future. Find - what they good at and put them in the right role.
3. Locations for the future. Now, what I suggest is for you to take familiar city as basis for your story and mend it for equestrians. I assume, that your previous place of living could fit the bill. Streets, buildings, alleyways, parks... turn your imagination to the max.
I have been reading all your chapters but what type of characters are you looking for.
Also when is the deadline?
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Agreed with that part but still he did say that ditzy and fluttershy and rainbow would be apart if the harem/herd so, yeah.
But for the ditzy thing that true and fluttershy could perhaps become the medic of the group.
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Personally, I don’t want Rainbow Dash to be apart of the harem. Why would anyone be in relationship with someone who physically abused them prior without remorse?
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I’m nowhere near the deadline yet.
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Everyday characters that live a normal life or, some who is apart of a gang. Anything you want. I'll just make the decision whether it's suitable or not.
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Why are you so focused on harem? Ditzy would be just enough, Fluttershy and Ditzy is already a lot for Joel. Putting Dash into this will either destroy their relationships, or the story itself. Think about it - saying yes to Ditzy will make Joel carry responsibility for not just his new gf, but Dinky too.
Besides, Joel is not the only character. There is also Spike and Frostbite.
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Fair but you have to remember that dash somehow remembers Joel, so who knows.
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Then explain to me - what is the sole purpose of a harem? It was created for a royal family to carry more pretenders to the throne. Why would Joel need more than one beloved? Sometimes you just need to say no to the tempting things.
I'm arguing not because I don't like your ideas, but because they, arguably, wouldn't fit for the reality of this fic. If Blazen decides, that Joel would need that simplicity of "there should be three gf's, because he's suffered a lot" - I would not say a word. If he say "there should be more realism" - there's going to be complications for the better of the story. The ideology of "anything for the better of my character" is not going to work, it's not that kind of a story.
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No more talks about harem, I've made my mind up a long time ago on that subject...
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Sorry… but still I have to ask was twilight actually nice and not like dosh?
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There is a twist to Twilight that will blow everyone’s heads off but no, she isn’t apart of Dosh’s plans.
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Sure thing, lad.
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So, other than that, any thing else you’d like to see?
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In the future, Dinky calling Joel "dad", and Frostbite - "grandpa".
For AJ to learn about Frostbite's past.
Beating Dosh's fucking face into the ground by our giant with the power of pure anger (for that - Dosh needs to hurt anyone from the Apples).
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Haha, sure.
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Come on how bad could it be on a scale of 1 to 10
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Hmm, say do you have a plan for dash on what she in charge of? Besides the *cough* shall not be mention along with the other two*cough*
Like maybe dash be a practice panther to them or spare panther or teacher to teach them new tricks or a scout since she could be in and out before ever being seen?
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Wait why would dinky call him grandpa unless he’s related to Joel.
And hey may she call Leo uncle Leo?
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It’s BAD!! You’ll hate me for it.
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Yeah, I definitely have plans for her and how the relationship will slow build.
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By relationship you mean what I think IT means along with the other two?
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Hey let’s not go that far unless she punches baby yoda or a human child then that’s when everything off the table
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We shall see…
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It’s twisted… I’ll let you mind run while with that.
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… oh shit.
Yeah Joel going to need .50 caliber to put down an alicorn
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Probably more…
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I just want to know do any of the boyfriends or the equestrian girls even have feelings for them or is it just pretended for just to get popular? I just want to know do they even love them?
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For some it's love, for some it's lust, for one its popularity.
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*Pulls out bolter*
Nah needs something bigger
Calls I’m ac-130
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Who’s the one for popular, guessing it sunset?
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Haha true, probably an orbital strike too.
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No...
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Oh wait fluttershy perhaps?
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Yes, like Fluttershy said, she never really like him but, she felt forced into it.
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Guessing for lust one of them is dash and pinkie?
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Yeah, pretty much.
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That seems accurate. But if she’s dating someone for nothing in return then why does dash still date him?
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Lust, sometimes you don't need a reason other than that. They are teens remember.
Then seriously which one of the boyfriends is really in a real relationship with the girls. Also I'm working on a character for your story. He's going to be like a big brother for Spike and Joel.
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I really don’t want to give out much but, it’ll be clear who the which couple it’ll be. Also, can’t wait too see your character.
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Also, send the details about your character by private mail, we can discuss what’s appropriate and what’s not there.
Okay but how do I do that?
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Go on my profile page and on the top right corner, there should be a box with three lines on one another, click on that and there should be an option to message privately.
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Fair enough. And it does make sense for pinkie being we’ll pinkie.
By the way did you change your profile pic?
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He’s right
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Yep, had to change it.
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Why if I may ask. And if you don’t then that’s fine too.
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We’ll, if you know me, like my football and that in the pic is Mo Salah.