Update on "Bardock: Saiyan Warrior of Equestria" · 10:17pm Mar 1st, 2023
I've been doing some introspection on some of my stories and I realized how much I rush certain things, specifically relationships and such, in my other story "Minxy's New Adventure: Reset" I didn't give much build up to Twilight's and Rainbow Dash's relationship, this is due to one of my more common errors as a writer, I thought people would be able to give themselves context and such but I should have been putting more hints and dialogue that would suggest they had feelings for each other, this doesn't mean I'll be revoking my stories for rewriting purposes this just means that Chapters for my current project will take longer for chapters to be complete, not too long and definitely not as long as the gap between Chapter 1 and 2 right now but noticeably longer than the usual gap between my stories chapters
I can confirm that art for Chapter 2 is almost done and writing has begun, I can also confirm the name of the next 3 chapters! I have notes and concepts done for Chapter 3 and 4, as for Chapter 2, i've confirmed all the notes and concepts that work most cya there!
2. Proof of Power
3. Meeting with A Goddess
4. Glimpse into Darkness