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Underwood


aka UnderwoodART / PinkPony.

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  • 9 weeks
    Two-Wicked Candle

    Its been in progress for a very long time, as I've mentioned before, but the more I push on with new chapters, the more unacceptable the initial chapters become. I got lost in the sauce of the latest chapter, bringing back an old friend (and the complications of planned then rescinded design changes), but I really need to focus back on the original chapter rewrites. You might think this is

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  • 39 weeks
    Writers Block Over (maybe)

    As explained in my last blog entry, I hit a wall after writing an entire chapter that took the sisters' journey in the wrong direction. Since then, I have been stuck on how to reconcile this error; do I rewrite the entire chapter I was proud of, or compromise my greater vision of the story?

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  • 48 weeks
    TToTS Ch.22: When Disaster Strikes

    Oh boy. So, some time ago (sadly not dated because I didn't finish it) I decided to write Tirek/Scorpan's backstory, waiting for a point to insert it. I decided that Chapter 22 was a good a time as any, placing it as a filler while the sisters passed through the Lowlands Forest. Before continuing the (let's call it Tau) backstory, I wanted to keep the momentum of the real journey flowing, so I

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  • 50 weeks
    Flight of the Valkyrie, Complete

    Well, not quite.

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  • 58 weeks
    FotV Ch.1 Updated

    In my pursuit of rewriting Chapter 1 of TToTS (having now finished the Prologue), I accidentally rewrote Chapter 1 of FotV, slightly recontextualising Star's landing and Twilight and Star's behaviour to be more in line with later chapters (the first chapter was three years old!). It's up to you whether you want to reread it; it's 800 words longer, but nothing really different happens. I may

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Feb
6th
2023

Realism is a Thing · 1:18am Feb 6th, 2023

Okay, so I may have been overly optimistic about my "five chapters in three months" goal in the last post. It came from a place of honesty, based on the progress I had made in one day and my eagerness, but not accounting for the long down times between writing sessions. Rewriting the initial chapters of TToTS is a *HUGE* undertaking, with the Prologue already clocking in at 8,700 words--twice the original--with this being the... third rewrite attempt? So while that is more of a long-term goal (and I do still intend to finish it this year, preferably this half), I have more manageable shorter-term goals:

  1. Finish Flight of the Valkyrie. I have spread myself too thin, and I need to finish something. I am proof-reading the final chapter now, with only the epilogue left after that (and some bonus chapters after that, if/when I feel like it).
  2. Continue The Tale of Two Sisters. The truth is, if I force myself to only work on the rewrite, I simply won't want to write. Chapter 21 is almost written, and I plan to continue passively pushing forward while working on my other tasks.
  3. I started another story. Yeah. Not a goal, but I wrote about 2,500 words setting up a "Two Sisters universe" spin-off, focusing entirely on the Mane Six, set post-Season 9, pre-time-skip. I don't expect I will work on it much, but it's there, and I think it will be a cool story; and it will let me play more with the canon characters once FotV ends, focusing on Rainbow Dash and more time-travel-esque shenanigans. Actually, the main problem with this story is that it will spoil Ask-Pink-Pony lore that the story hasn't reached yet (I mean, it hasn't reached any story yet), so it's going to be tough to release, as I've only teased aspects of APP's plot in my fics before.

I've mentioned this before, but I wanted to get some feedback if at all possible. I have plans to adapt The Tale of Two Sisters into an original work of fiction. While the world and the instigating factors will remain the same (old-gods, castle escape, sisters raised by wizard), the actual progression of the story will be structured more like a Zelda game, with "areas" and "bosses" to progress through, rather than the current flow of consciousness. So my question is: Would you still be interested in reading my period adventure vaguely based on TToTS (without the time-travel nonsense to account for MLP canon) if it wasn't connected to MLP, and if so, would it still need to be anthro for you to be interested? I've not decided exactly on the races yet myself, whether mythological or human. Let me know below! To be clear, it won't replace TToTS, and I probably wouldn't focus on it until after TToTS is done.

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