Jan
22nd
2023
Have to Do More For Fate of the Legion. · 7:28am Jan 22nd, 2023
Well looks like my instincts telling me to finish the dark version story for Fate of the Legion yesterday wasn't the right thing to do. Based on comments it was too fast paced. That tends to be a thing I hear a few times. I guess its just my style to get things done as quickly as possible. Ah well. A few more days on this story won't hurt. I've made an alteration to the story and had Cozy Glow escape instead of getting killed in that chapter. She'll be back for one more round. But I can't do more than 2 or 3 more chapters. I'm still gonna keep how she gets killed the same, but I'll see about dragging out the battle a bit more.
Man this story is dark man
I'm gonna ask, Isn't the successor verse supposed to be dark and sad? In the first chapter Celestia and Luna are dead and then in chapter 2 Cadence dies! Umm I couldn't read past chapter 2.. Sorry.. 
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Well that depends on your point of view. The main point of it is breaking the curse of immortality. It is always sad when someone dies. But when you believe immortality is a curse like I do, death is sometimes the better course so that one can be with their friends in death. The ending is bittersweet at least where they are all reunited in the afterlife. If you think immortality is a gift that's fine. You just do you. There are some dark and sad moments but there are other happy things as well. Try to read more if you can.