Just curious about my story. · 11:03am Dec 27th, 2022
Simple trivia regarding my story "Assistance Tailor and Handyman at Equestria".
Why no one leaves me a comment, hear what he thinks?.
I love writing and I would also really like to hear what you think to see if I did a good job. I write on other sites that I don't tell you so as not to advertise. I also helped other authors who also had their comments. Sometimes I don't comment on stories I occasionally read, for better or for worse for various reasons. whether I like the story or not. I'm busy and little free time and I forget it.
Here, however, since I started writing, I haven't received any comments like 'nice work'. None received.
I accepted constructive criticism, (except for telling me like I have to take an English course) on improving my grammar which in my small way, even if I'm not a native speaker, I'm trying to improve.
ask for advice?. Opinions?. since I wrote except those comments above, I have not received many other comments and, every now and then I think about it.
They don't comment on me because it's very similar to the story of Wolfman93? special spa treatment: human edition
Author Wolf and I talked, i think. once and he didn't mind. What's this?. many readers consider that history inviolable, sacred. Is my idea of this very similar story sacrilegious? think about it for a moment, okay?
I know that once, I'm talking about a few months ago, I made a similar blog that said I was deleting the story.
But this time, I'm really, really, really tempted to do it. But out of respect for those few readers who probably follow me or who others follow my story but don't comment, I made this blog just to talk about it.Therefore, this is an optional request. you can also comment it here, or in my story. to know what you think of it by the end of the year. Because on 1/1/2023 I will delete. definitely. [b]DE_FI_NI_TI_VA! my story. (read the new blog there will be no cancellation!)
thanked those who will read this blog to the end. And wished you a happy new year and hopefully better than this one.
Here Flareblack out. See you next time.
How are your pronouns?
Ok, the story is actually pretty cool, I did like all chapter (especially the naughty) 😉 but I did see some errors grammars to when I read them they need to be fix. Chapters little almost relate some parts of special spa treatment: human edition, you need to be creative differently way of storyline, like differently time line when pony learn technology more advanced or pony who still old time then main character appears on those times. I be honest with you stories I really like them very much. Just make sure you write what is wrong.
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very messed up. Sometimes even if I write the character as "He", she puts it as "She" and vice versa.
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So, what do you suggest to do?. Erase or rewrite history from the beginning totally?.
I would try rewrite the whole story, I know it be pain in the a**, trust me I be there and I terribly on writing but try to do differently story than original, make sure you write are correct grammar.
God dam, honestly I forgot about this story. From what I remember it was pretty good. It would just suck if it gets deleted.
My thoughts would be if you are set on making a new story, have this old story still up. Because 500k is a nice milestone, and a decent read. Just have the words *old version* in the title should you start a new story.
My thoughts on deleting is it should be the last thing someone does for a story. Just my opinion on that. But anyway, have a great new year.
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Improving your writing is the better way.
& rewriting your tales, in a different setting is a challenge to you and the main character.
My opinion, back stories of the main character plus the others is one to remember [short but simple], lands beyond Equestria is an adventure calling to you & different place or time.
Truthfully i like your story but im easily forget something