I am a beginning writer and like all of you, I will have some mistakes at first so if I ever do have any in my stories tell me kindly in a PM i will try to fix it ASAP!
When Discord manipulates Rainbow to a point where she ends up bullying Fluttershy, something unlocks in Shy that Rainbow never expected in Fluttershy..Revenge....and Fluttershy will take that revenge too as far as possibly hurting Rainbow dash...
When a huge fire burns down Rarity's house that she, her mother and new lover were living in for a time being she goes into depression and rushes back to Ponyville for comfort, only to become supicious as to what her 'lover' was up too.....but