• Member Since 7th Mar, 2013
  • offline last seen Dec 15th, 2019

alicorn comet


I am a beginning writer and like all of you, I will have some mistakes at first so if I ever do have any in my stories tell me kindly in a PM i will try to fix it ASAP!

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After 2 nightmares pinkie's sanity starts slowly snapping to where she forgot everything from parties and sleeping on the job!

Chapters (4)
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Comment posted by Jphyper deleted Jun 3rd, 2013
Comment posted by Cheesey Microwave deleted Jun 3rd, 2013

If her sanity breaks that means.....this is madnesss THIS IS SPARTA!!!

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Comment posted by Lisa_M deleted Nov 5th, 2013

Please don't hate me when I say this, but your story needs some serious editing! I mean, c'mon man, seriously?
But I did like the story, so there's that.

I like the ended chapter.

But seriously I have wired dreams and my sanity never disconnected. So you know.

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