• Member Since 21st Jan, 2012
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GrapeVino


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On the eve of the Summer Sun Festival Celestia has gone missing, and it's up to Luna to find her. What awaits Luna, however, is not only her sister, but a long awaited confrontation of her past.
Luna may have been able to avoid speaking of her imprisonment for this long, but like her term on the moon, nothing lasts forever and she must finally talk about those one thousand years. It seems though, that Celestia isn't acting how she would expect.


Authors note:
On the story: I had the idea (most likely unoriginal) of writing a story where Celestia and Luna finally acknowledge what happened so long ago when Celestia entrapped her own sister on the moon by herself. I went under the assumption that Luna was conscious the whole time, and the Alicorns being ageless, also immortal, hence her survival there. I wanted to add the twist in terms of behaviour of the two, and I honestly can't claim to know a huge amount about psychology but I've done my best.

Generally:
This is my first attempt at posting a story on FIM Fiction, and I will warn that I had no pre-readers, this is mainly to finally get this somewhere where it can be read since it's been sitting uncompleted in storage for a while. As I add to it I'll upload 'chapters', though it is only a short story.

By all means be critical, but keep these points in mind, I am also by no means any kind of 'trained' in writing. I enjoy writing from time to time and this is the result. I hope you enjoy!

Chapters (4)