My first story. Critics, gimme all you got! I want to improve as much as possible.

So, you are in Equestria, and you seem to be a pony. Cliche, yes? Except... every one else is human! Now, our brave hero must go on a journey to figure out why the HAY this is happening. Laughter will be laughed, tears will be cried ( although I hope not), and Ponies will not be ponies. Wait...