Morningstar was a simple stallion living on an unimportant planet at the very edge of the galaxs. He longed for adventure, and for the magic from the fables his uncle had once told him of. Little did he know that his experiments were bringing him closer than he had ever expected. On the run from the coalition he must do what he can to make sure that he, and his friends, survive.

Tirek and his younger brother Scorpan have been terrorizing Equestria for weeks. Now, Scorpan heads north to find more power for his brother, but what he finds is more than what he had been expecting.

This was writen for the Writers Training Ground #20 from Equestria Daily.
Image from St-Pete:
http://st-pete.deviantart.com/

I would highly appreciate any criticism, but please keep it constructive.

After the Cutie Mark crusaders prove what they learned at 'Twilight Time' Twilight lets the go use their newfound skills. It's not like anything bad can happen, right?

This is my first story
it was written for Equestria Daily's Writer's Training Ground #009: "Twilight Time"
any constructive criticism would be highly appreciated.