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DarkStarWolf53


I am an aspiring novelist/poet who writes high fantasy/action/adventure novels/fanfics and pretty poetry.

Aug
28th
2016

Quitting FIMFiction · 10:34pm Aug 28th, 2016

I no longer have any interest in writing MLP fanfics, so I'm quitting this site and unpublishing my work.

I still watch some of the episodes (mainly the darker/more action packed episodes), and I love the comics, even more than the show. But I don't have interest in writing fanfics any more.

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May
21st
2016

Still on semi-hiatus, but... · 4:56am May 21st, 2016

The other night, I got a really good idea for some scenes to add to my KoA fanfic, so I'm going to unpublish the chapters that I plan to work on, and will re-publish them when the edits are done. Currently I'm focusing on making my "Trouble's Waking" and "Bounty Hunter" chapters a bit more dramatic, as well as exploring some of Goldfeather's backstory in those chapters.

I'm not sure when these edits will be done since I'm in class year round, but I'll let you know when I finish them.

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Jan
22nd
2016

Going on another hiatus · 7:26am Jan 22nd, 2016

I'm going on hiatus from FIMfiction again- I'm in college now, and am also working on a trilogy of proper novels rather than fanfics. So I might be on hiatus for a few years. Sorry for the inconvenience.

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Jan
8th
2016

Re-re-editing Kingdom of Avia UPDATED · 6:55am Jan 8th, 2016

So the EQD rejection letter for KoA said the following:

"Right away, I'm seeing very unsteady perspective, repetitive word choice, unsubtle presentation of character emotion, obtrusive descriptions, lack of narration to set the scene during conversations at times, and repetitive sentence structure. The absolute rarity of paragraphs longer than two lines says you're probably not fleshing out the narration enough."

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Jan
3rd
2016

Got rejected by EQD- which I find oddly amusing · 9:01pm Jan 3rd, 2016

So I submitted Kingdom of Avia and later Bad Luck for a Bad Manager to EQD- got rejected, and they actually gave a legit reason this time! (Though I suspect they didn't read beyond the first chapter for both stories).

I'm probably going to submit all my currently-published stories as time goes on, and get rejected each time- I'm keeping score!

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Dec
20th
2015

I'm off school, so... (one-chapter-a-day goal) · 8:19am Dec 20th, 2015

To my followers:

I plan on doing at least one fanfic chapter a day every day save December 24 until my break is over. Today I added a new chapter to Bad Luck for a Bad Manager, tomorrow going into Monday I hope to finish it (including the bonus "what-if" chapter) so I can work on more of Kingdom of Avia

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Nov
30th
2015

S5 episode ranking in my opinion · 4:49pm Nov 30th, 2015

Rank in order of best to worst episodes and why (in my own personal opinion)

1) The Cutie Re-Mark- Legit WAR in canon, LOTS of conflict!
2)Slice of Life- wonderful silly humor and a canon lesbian couple with Lyra and BonBon! Those looks they gave each other weren't just 'best-friend' looks...
3)The Cutie Map- creepy cult leaders anyone?
4) Do Princesses Dream of Magic Sheep?- Princess Big Mac, a new monster, and the very weird Equestria dreamscape.

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Nov
28th
2015

Season Finale thoughts (possible spoilers) · 9:30pm Nov 28th, 2015

Welp, that was dark. And SO MUCH ACTION!! LOVED it!

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Nov
20th
2015

(More) Fanfic updates · 8:26pm Nov 20th, 2015

I mentioned in a previous post that I wanted to ask Dr. Wolf if I could use his OC in Dr. Bobtail. Well, I did, but due to a line by Skaydi that I don't want to change (it showcases an important part of her personality), the story is PG-13, so I can't use his OC.

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Nov
14th
2015

YES! I now have 50 followers! · 6:24pm Nov 14th, 2015

I now have 50 followers! What should I do to celebrate this milestone? An ask-me-anything type blog or an ask-my-OCs-anything type blog or what?

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