The prologue is now completely re-written! Go check it out!

Ran into a wall with M&M. No proofreaders available and no places left to go and look for some.

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Changelog:
- The Vector now holds roughly five billion people, as well as having six months of supplies instead of four.
- Added a small scene with the Admiral after he wakes up.
- Tweaked a tiny bit of dialogue. Mac is taking DNA samples.
- Minor grammar issues cleaned.
- Tweaked Celestia's letter.

This one contains possible spoilers, so read at your own risk.

Changelog:
-Changed the name of the chapter.
-Minor grammar corrections.
-Added a conversation between Luna and the red-eyed creature.
-Overall, the scene with Luna was the major addition. Expect heavier modifications in the future.

Changelog:
- Intermission added, taking place between the prologue and the first chapter. You do not have to read it if you don't want to, since there are no major elements taken/added.

The prologue has been combed through. No major changes were done, but in any case, I will list them below.

Changelog:
- Minor grammar fixes.
- Minor tweaks to the info regarding the Vector, explaining how it was able to get so close to the planet.
- Removed the "Luna Doll", now replaced by one of a CG trooper. I was planning to go somewhere with it, but I ended up scrapping the concept.

As many of you should be aware, "Machine And Might" is undergoing a re-write process. I realized that I need all the help I can get for this, so now I'm here, asking you guys, especially those who found problems with the fic itself. Shoot me a PM or leave a comment, and we'll see what we can do.

As always, thank you.

EDIT: As in, proofreading assistance.

Yes, I am going to rewrite it, again. Check the latest "chapter" for more information on this.

I've been thinking lately.... What do you expect from Machine And Might? Should I even continue it? If I were to make a sequel, what would you expect from it?

If you left a comment, you have my thanks.

I'd like to recommend "Queen Of Blades", a fic starring Kerrigan from Starcraft two, wrote by one of my proofreaders, Salacar. It's very well written in my own opinion, and has a lot of potential.

And now for the question.... For those who have read "Machine And Might", what is your opinion on it? Is it worth your time? You know, those sort of things, etc.

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