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Norman_Steel


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Total Words: 10,926
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The magical land of Equestria gives the impression of being a land in which ponies live in peace and harmony. Yet, even this land is subject to the evil within its own inhabitants, something unknown to the joyful residents of Ponyville. Far away from the influence of the royal sisters, join Blanc, an aspiring detective and his best friend Ditzy Doo to the depths of this hellhole known as Trottingham, in which a dark secret is kept hidden from the prying eyes of commoners. A secret that might spell the slow and agonizing death of harmony in the land of Equestria.

Warning: References to mature themes, read at your own risk.

Also, I would appreciate feedback in order to improve.

Update: I don't know how to english so I'm getting a grammar nazi.

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After the royal wedding at Canterlot, Luna can't help but feel a bit jealous about the couple and the gift they share. Fearing that this could mean the return of Nightmare Moon she quickly asks Celestia for advice. Though sometimes the advice isn't the one she wants to hear. "I don't want that kind of love, I want.... true love, somepony with whom I can have a family.... maybe have some foals. I want love sister... is that too much to ask?"

Deciding that she needed another opinion, she decided to go visit a most unusual doctor and tell him the tale behind her sadness.

This is my first attempt at a sad story, it used to be related to my other story but I decided it would be better to tell it like this so the other story is gone... but it will be told in a small series I intend to start starring the Doctor and other ponies.

The Doctor's Office. (Coming after this story and another one.)

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