Jan
4th
2014
My story, and other things · 4:57pm Jan 4th, 2014
Hey guys! First, I have to say thank you for taking the time to read my story, whether you liked it or not. But you shouldn't have. It's really not that good. I don't like it at all, and feel it is a perfect example of telling, not showing. I do have story ideas in my head, and have tried to write them, but I just don't know how to execute them very well. I hope I get better at writing and eventually give you guys a good story to read, but I just haven't gotten good enough to feel good about
574259Don't worry, he won't.
572140 you're welcome! Your story seems interesting and pretty well written, just don't let the main character be a Mary sue!
Thanks for the fav!