Hey guys! First, I have to say thank you for taking the time to read my story, whether you liked it or not. But you shouldn't have. It's really not that good. I don't like it at all, and feel it is a perfect example of telling, not showing. I do have story ideas in my head, and have tried to write them, but I just don't know how to execute them very well. I hope I get better at writing and eventually give you guys a good story to read, but I just haven't gotten good enough to feel good about

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