Honestly I enjoyed the entire story I have always liked the mercenary plot I do hope you continue it yes there are some grammar and spelling errors but still it's a good story so please do continue it I like reading stories like this on this website you know after work and all that stuff so it's enjoyable to help me unwind and just forget about the world and its problems so please keep it up and thank you for a great story.

Thanks! what do you like about it?