Chapter 4 is out · 4:41am Mar 20th, 2012
Go read it. Meanwhile I need sleep.....
Go read it. Meanwhile I need sleep.....
I'm currently working on the edits I got from my editors. I promise the chapter will be up and running today. Although I don't know when. It maybe this afternoon to even midnight. But it will be up. I'll tell you all when.
Rough Draft for Chapter 4 of Upon Wings is complete. Now going through editing.
Working on Chapter 4. This is where the adventure part starts. I know I kind of dragged it on a bit (Especially since it's one of the key elements), but I kind of feel that all that I've done alright. If there was one thing I wish I did shorten. It was the funeral. I think it went to long.
Anyway a few people have asked me some questions so here are some answers.
1. Yes the Griffins will be returning and yes more about them will be explained.
Working on Chapter 4. This is where the adventure part starts. I know I kind of dragged it on a bit (Especially since it's one of the key elements), but I kind of feel that all that I've done alright. If there was one thing I wish I did shorten. It was the funeral. I think it went to long.
Anyway a few people have asked me some questions so here are some answers.
1. Yes the Griffins will be returning and yes more about them will be explained.
Chapter 3 of Upon Wings of Sacrifice is out!
Note: I’ve changed my formatting and style a bit. Thoughts are italics, not bold and Flashback are no longer italics as well. Chapter’s 1 and 2 have also been changed this way along with a few changes as well.
Enjoy
Well guys, chapter 1 and chapter 2 of Upon Wings of Sacrifice have be re-edited. Nothing's majorly changed except for a few grammar errors and better description of the scenes. I also think it's a lot better then it was before. You don't have to read it again if you already read the first two chapters already. I did this for three reasons: 1. To try again getting this on Equestria daily, 2. To fix some mistakes I made, 3. Just make the story better over all.
I know people want the next chapter to come, but my editors are still working on it. One of them is in the Military stationed at South Korea so that comes first before anything. On the other hand, the re-editing for Chapter 1 in my attempt to get this story on Equestria daily is working well, just need to do chapter 2.
So yeah, sorry it's taking so long guys, but trust me it will be worth the wait.
For all those who are interested. The rough draft for Chapter 3 of Upon Wings of Sacrifice is done. Now comes the editing part from both me and my editors. Still trying to find the problems on chapter 1 and chapter 2 so this fic can be on Equestria Daily.
Hopefully, all this will be done by the start of next week or so. Who knows.
Rated out.
I sometimes just take lyrics from existing songs and just make them into something else. I only ever do it when I'm bored or with writers block (Like I have now). This is based off of Glamours Life by Sheila E. I don't think I have to tell you who it's about...
She wears a pure white coat of snow
Even in the summer time
Everypony knows from the coy little wink
The mare’s got a lot on her mind
She's got big thoughts, big dreams
And heart full of generousness
When I see this mare